Surely this can't be as bad as Pack Challenge.
Read it at your own risk, my Little Barnacles.Īnne said “ squicky” and I said “ yippy!” this book is violently hazardous to one's health. Oh, and by the way: books like this one kinda sorta make me feel like. Shocking, I know.Īlso, also, also, also: why would you want to create a super engaging and likeable cast of characters when you can have a bunch of unpleasant, crass, hare-brained nitwits instead? Beats me and stuff. Because, strange as it sounds, a little subtlety never hurt anyone. A pathetically ridiculous, unappetizing, OTT, unsexy, worse than the worst of amateur porn-like read, however, it does make. Writing overabundant, distasteful, "we go at it like rabid barnacles in heat," TMI sex scenes does not a hot, steamy, sensual, erotic read make. No it bloody shrimping doesn’t.Īlso, also, also: sex scenes. Neither does it make it alright to objectify them and stuff. I'm weird, I know.Īlso, also: the fact that your story is a fictitious one doesn't make it okay for you to promote demeaning behavior towards tight pieces of ass women. This, too tends to magically turning me into a homicidal maniac with slightly slaughterish tendencies.
Especially if said Neanderthal asshole is incapable of seeing women as more than tight pieces of ass.
Thus magically turning me into a homicidal maniac with slightly slaughterish tendencies.Īlso: having a Neanderthal asshole with an IQ of -650 as a male MC is somewhat inadvisable. It simply magically turns her into an obnoxious, vulgar, hateful, rude, selfish, foul-mouthed bitch. Sad.Ī note to talented PNR authors everywhere: making your heroine an obnoxious, vulgar, hateful, rude, selfish, foul-mouthed bitch doesn't magically turn her into an assertive, bold, strong female character. This is Feminism, my once evil, nefarious cat, self-defenestrating after reading this book. Looks like feminism just committed suicide again! Surprise, surprise!
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